This is probably the only iteration I will be able to post because of Vimeo upload limits but thought it would be good to show where I am and what is left to do. A few things jump out; I still need to retrofit some more type over some of the middle section, the pink noise/tv transition is really annoying me and the colour grading from the horses to the pier need either changing or transitioning better (maybe with a few similarly coloured flares or overlays).
